The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/13
Nicely written with interesting storyline,a good reminder for us to pray before and during events. The only part I might change would be the word "men" to "young men" or even boys? The story seemed suited for younger people than men, at least to me. Just a thought.
You did a nice job of showing how prayer and faith can make a huge difference. You nailed the topic, all while delivering an important message.
01/22/13
You've managed to incorporate a vitally important message while nailing the topic. Nicely done. God bless~