The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful piece of work. I love your descriptions.
This is beautiful. I didn't notice the title until just now, but what a perfect fit. It wraps up the whole point of this story.

The only thing I might suggest is to tighten up your writing by getting rid of unnecessary or repeated words. Take this: What is the measure of a woman? Who decides the measure of a woman? It can be tightened like this: What is the measure of a woman and who decides it?

This piece filled my eyes with tears. The pain of the MC was palpable as was the love of the husband. It was a delightful read, that covered the topic and still delivered a beautiful message and reminder.
Very sweet and loving story.
01/22/13 touching.
God bless~
Congratulations for placing second in level 2 and for ranking 28 overall!
Sorry I meant 3rd in your level but you still did great at 28 overall!
Congrats. God Bless~