The Official Writing Challenge
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Good job. I enjoyed this interesting story with a good message.

God bless~
I am so glad that this wasn't 'for real' and that Greg still has a chance!

You pulled this off well producing a story that is a fun read with a very real message.

I think this was a super creative take on the topic. Though my grandma used to love game shows when trying to think of a topic this didn't enter my mind at all. Plus you also pair it with the perfect message.
Congratulations! I really thought this would do well.
Great job! You kept the story moving well and the dialogue went right along with it. It's a totally realistic situation that I can easily see in a church service. Tied in with the topic perfectly and wrapped up your message as well. A well-deserved placing. :)
Wow, that's telling it like it is! If only people would see their choice is a real one and doesn't need to be a gamble. Great job and congrats on your placing!
Congratulations Ken!

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