The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/12
Wow, I totally enjoyed reading this creative take on the story of Elijah's "rapture" into heaven. This is great!
12/11/12
Descriptive, and altogether a well written entry. Nicely done. God bless~
Oh this is a delight! I think it was quite clever how you brought the story alone. Building the suspense and conflict with each line made me lean in closer to the screen. Seeing the footsteps in the sand, not to mention the knowledge that they would be deeper had the friend been carrying the other was all a great, creative and fresh take on the topic. This is an out of the box story for sure and I truly enjoyed every bit.
12/13/12
Congratulations. God bless~
Congratulations on your ribbon and also for ranking 18th overall!