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12/11/12
What beautiful memories you have. I was transported, taking those family trips with you.

Just a thought, it's been suggested by others here at FW, that you add an extra blank line between paragraphs. It makes it easier for the reader.

I love your ending, the dance steps and the vision of your Father dancing with Jesus. You've had a blessed childhood.
12/11/12
This made my heart smile and my eyes tear. I loved it. WHat a wonderful entry.
Thank you so much.

God bless~
This is a beautiful testimonial to your parents and to all parents who work hard at helping their kids grow into respectful, responsible and caring adults. Often when they do that they tend to leave home as well, leaving a gap in the family but with God's help the gap gets filled with memories and stories of their lives in the world outside the safety of home. This is a lovely message and a well-written piece.