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I enjoyed this story. It reminds me of when I first started to learn how to swim. We all have something we need to conquer. I'm glad you were able to conquer this one. What an enjoyable story, Thanks for sharing.
12/11/12
Awww, this was an adorable read. I loved it!

God bless~
This is a lovely story. I really liked how you showed the relationship between father and daughter but also how the crowd reacted all in the name fo protecting a little one. Often God asks us to take scary steps in this world, but like in your story Jesus is with us every step of the way. Plus he was thoughtful enough to provide human compassion and protection for those weak moments in life when we doubt if we'll be able to take even one more step. Nicely done.
12/13/12
Congratulations on your 3rd place award. You deserved it. Your piece was wonderful
12/13/12
Congrats...God bless~
12/13/12
Congrats! God Bless~