The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/12
As we all come nearer to "that home stretch," our goals and thinking do often change. I can't imagine trying to do what you were doing with the class and working, plus homework. Wow! I'd never heard the song you mention, but the words are beautiful. Thank you.
12/09/12
I really connected with your piece. The line - "Fear - fear of the unknown, along with fear of not being able to provide for myself in my later years has been my constant companion along the path I have been walking thus far." is exactly where I have been. Thank you for sharing.
This is a lovely devotion. I liked how you started and then brought the piece full-circle with that lovely song. You may have done this but I want to make sure everyone knows to check and see if the song is copyright protected or in the Public Domain. You really did a nice job with this message. I liked the way you used a sport saying that many people can relate to. Good job.
12/11/12
Good job with this piece...and a lot of great messages. God bless~