The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/12
I've had a similar encounter with a chipmunk in my own garden. They do have a tendency to try to look innocent, don't they?
This is a darling little piece. It made me smile and I could easily picture the little creature sticking his head back out at you. It's also a great example of how we should live our lives. There are many beautiful gifts along the rocky road of life. Yet, as busy humans, we think I'll stop tomorrow to smell the roses. But then before we realize it, a chipmunk or perhaps an early frost destroys the rose. We need to live each day to its fullest and not get bogged down in everyday life. This is a stunning message for your readers and it made me stop and think. I enjoyed it and am thankful that you shared it with the world.
12/04/12
Awwwwww. So sweet! I loved this. Thank you.
God bless~
12/06/12
I agree...an adorable scene!

Just a note: something was off with the formatting of your entry, which made it harder to read. Be sure to give it a good review before posting.

Keep writing! :-)

12/06/12
Congrats! God bless~