The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/12
I really liked your character development in this piece. Nicely done.
Wow, what an intense story. I could see the ending coming a bit. Be careful not to let the title give the ending away. You did a fantastic job of building the characters and the suspense. I felt like I was watching a cop TV show--except on them do the cops rarely prayer. What a great way to show how God loves us and hears are prayers even at the end when things may feel hopeless.
11/27/12
Wow - an intense story. Very different. Thanks.
God bless~
Congratulations for your second place ribbon and for ranking 19th overall! Happy Dance!! (The top stories depending on number of entries are given on the message boards usually sometime after 6 pm or so on Thursday. Out of 61 entries yours ranking 19th overall--great job. Keep writing and you'll keep getting better and better!