The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/12
I enjoyed this poem and the message that was in it. It is so easy to live life without thinking about the eternal value of our daily decisions.
This is really lovely. You did a wonderful job with the rhythm and rhymes while still delivering an important message.
This is a nice poem, I love it.
11/25/12
Like the others, I enjoyed this poem. There were a few punctuation issues (comma placement), but overall, well done!
11/27/12
So beautiful! Thanks.
God bless~