The Official Writing Challenge
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I absolutely love this. It is such a great twist on the topic. IT is a fresh and creative idea. You did a wonderful job of painting pictures for me. Some of the verbs you used like gyrated, scurried, sneered are perfect examples of the writing mantra: Show, Don't tell. You did a superb job in building your characters and turning the tables. The ending brought the story full-circle and though I'm not a huge romance fan this love story surely hooked me. :)
11/19/12
This is such a cute story. You can almost see favorite actresses playing out this scene. Great writing all around :)
Congratulations on your HC! Happy Dance!!
12/29/12
I liked this one...keep up the good work. God Bless.