The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great piece. I often don't think about the people who might be wearing the clothes I donate. You opened my eyes.

Make sure you start a new paragraph each time a different person is speaking. You also forgot some end quotes, but with the new paragraph, it will be easier for you to spot those mistakes.

I think you covered the topic in a fresh and unique way. You had a great beginning and the ending brought the story full circle. Well done.
11/10/12
Awesome story on the Salvation Army...they help a lot of people...God bless....