The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 277 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
Wow! This is so intense. I could absolutely identify with the MC. It almost felt like you had been eavesdropping on my thoughts. People will often think my stories or poems are dark but like yours as long as there is the Light at the end, one can be pulled from that horrible dark and dank place that festers in our minds.
11/10/12
This presents a stark reality between life in the flesh and in the spirit...God bless and thanks for sharing...
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level two!