The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely rendition of the familiar parable. I could also see it as an allegory for a baby developing inside a uterus. It's a tad week on the topic because it's not exactly about a park but it is still a beautiful piece. I'm sure it will touch many hearts.
11/03/12
What a nice poem. I liked your description of the seeds. You did a really good job.

God Bless!