The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very well written. You certainly expressed life, with all it's disappointments. Although, fortunately those disappointments don't always happen. Life is often hard, but not always.
Still, your writing is wonderful.
01/18/05
Well written, but just something to think about Christ learned obedience through the things He suffered. Life is not always filled with happiness but hopefully we learn from all experiences both bad and good.
Keep up the good work your writing is very good.
This is very well written, but has a negative feel. We all long for Heaven and experience disappointments in life, but I think most people would rather focus on spring than winter. Your conclusion was hopeful though. Use caution -- even an overweight sales clerk is infinitely valuable in God's eyes.

01/21/05
set goals, keep writing and allow God to birth in you the best and we might be standing in line for your books!
Welcome to FaithWriters! I got your point about firsts being sometimes negative (though not always), BUT because of what Jesus did at calvary, we all have a second chance, praise God. God bless you.