The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this. At first I thought you overdid it with the park but then your explanation was like a light and it made me smile. This is definitely a different type of poem yet still right on topic.
11/03/12
What a simple little poem that has so much truth in it. Yay, for God! Nice touch.

God bless!

11/03/12
I loved it. Your varied uses of the word park was interesting to me, and even made me smile. But it's how you wrapped it up that made me thankful.