The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
Amen & Amen...loved your heart for God that is clearly evident in your words in this beautiful poem. Very nice.

God bless~
10/27/12
Nicely done. So glad The Savior drank from that cup so we could have eternal life!
10/28/12
A very nice poem. What a Saviour indeed.

God bless!
10/30/12
This was absolutely beautiful! The words spoken were of such conviction and blessed my heart. The rhythm seemed very good and I would certainly place this in top contention. Truly a blessing!
This is really lovely. It flows beautifully and the rhymes are nice. There have been quite a few stories about Jesus' cup this week, as it would be one of the first things many Christians would think of. I did enjoy it though. I'm not very musical but I think this would work well as a song. Nice job.
10/31/12
You have excellent descriptive words in this lovely poem with its priceless message! I thought it flowed quite well, and I was blessed by reading it!
11/03/12
Congratulations on your lovely and powerful poem. It was a joy to read several times through.
Congratulations for placing first in your level and 20 overall!
A well deserved win. Congrats!