The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
This was a totally creative and clever take on the topic. I loved it, loved the ending, and how the MC recognized that the "cup of blood" is the way for eternal life.

Nicely done. God Bless~
10/28/12
Such an amazing story. I love your unique idea for this topic. Very well written.

God bless!
This is the kind of writing that I love. Thanks.
10/29/12
This is a beautiful piece of writing, and it moved me (made my eyes widen and well up, my heart jump, and laughter to burst forth). Love it.
I really enjoyed this creative piece. You covered the topic in a fresh way. Many stories have been written about Jesus' cup this week but yours was from a creative POV. Though some may say a dream is an overused literary tool, I do believe God uses dreams to get through to us. It's sometimes the only times we allow our brains to relax enough to hear God's voice. You did a nice job of developing the characters and the conflict.