The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
Nicely done and nicely worded. I liked this part very much: (I understand your problem
the weakness you are feeling.
He touched my life so gently
my soul has begun healing.)

I am happy to say I have personally found that healing! Thanks for sharing.
10/25/12
Just beautiful!

God bless~
10/28/12
A beautiful poem. Great work.

God bless!
Enjoyed this one very much
10/29/12
I loved the image of the broken, pre-Christ cup! That single line, says so much.
This is really lovely. I could easily relate to the MC as I have been in such a dark place as well and it can be overwhelming for sure. Good job.