The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
Interesting telling of an all too common problem. You've crammed an entire story into a few lines. I love the ending.
10/25/12
Clearly a fantastic job with a beautiful message.

Thank you. God bless~
10/28/12
A cute poem dealing with a serious issue. Good job.

God Bless!
Short and sweet and very neat. All so true, poor Jane, boohoo.
This is a cute, playful little poem. You made me smile with your slightly sardonic sense of humor.