The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/12
REALLY like that last sentence - sums everything up so well - and powerfully! Great reminders for all of us. Thanks.
This is an interesting mini-sermon. You make many valid points and you do a nice job using the scripture to back up your POV. The only thing I might suggest would be instead of focusing on many verses, pick just a couple and then emphasize them. Unfortunately the people who may need to hear your message the most will get overwhelmed by the many Bible verses and skip over this piece. You have a lot of great things to say and I can feel the passion in your words. Good job.
10/22/12
Very interesting and well written piece. Thank You

God Bless, Lynn
10/24/12
Touching sermon with a great message. Nicely done.

God Bless~