The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/12
This was touching, poignant and filled with truths of LIFE. It was such a pertinent message and well-written.

God Bless~
09/15/12
Love the title, and love the application of this week's theme.

This is a well-written, moving piece (I'm ready to open my wallet...) and you did a great job of showing, like in this phrase here:

"The strain of the event was pounding through her words."
Well written about a very genuine need. I like the way you presented it - not preachy - just asking for introspection and discernment.
09/18/12
Wonderful message in your story. If only every city could open a 'Butterfly House'...this issue is dear to my heart! Well done.
09/18/12
Written after my own heart....just a beautiful story and well written, thoughtful and humbling.

Thank You..

God Bless,
09/18/12
Very moving in its scope and its depth. Loved the title, and the brief speech which summed it up so well, as a positive expression of what a "megachurch" may do when a smaller church would be swamped by the need.
09/19/12
Love, especially, the line "one butterfly at a time." Enjoyed this very much.