The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved how you brought this topic into full view with Biblical references. Nicely done. God bless~
Such a clever creative version of this Biblical event...your imperative poetic style matched the event perfectly!
This is definitely an out of the box approach on the topic. There may have been a line or tow (like the rye and white bread) that may not have had perfect rhytm but it brought a smile to my face just the same. I think this is a creative take on the topic and could easily see it as a Sunday School song. It would definitely be something the kids could relate to. Nice job.