The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/12
This was a beautiful read, relaxing, touching and mesmerizing in its simplicity yet elaborate message. Wonderful job.

Thank you. God Bless~
09/18/12
I liked the way you made this piece seem so human and something we can relate to even today. Thanks for bringing the scriptures alive.
This is a strong devotion. I think you did a nice job of retelling the Bible story. I also liked how you showed times in your life when you also felt afraid and alone. My only suggestion would be to tell us even more about your difficult times. It sometimes is easier to relate to the modern trials than the Biblical ones. You did a nice job of linking the two together and came out with a beautiful message. Congratulations for your second place ribbon. Good job!
09/20/12
Congrats. God bless~