The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/12
This is a lot of fun. "What's your rythm and what's your crime?" Great stuff. That said, I must confess, I think this article was too short. You have a flair for fine rhymes. I want more.
You have a great sense of humor. I almost don't think you need the opening paragraph. It made me think that you were going to quote someone else's poem. The piece you wrote is full of divine lines and I remember my siblings insisting that cheese puffs were dead caterpillars and jello is made from horse hooves. Those familial family practical jokes aren't nearly as good as cookies and cake eaten under the Oaks. :)