The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/12
Interesting take on the topic. I enjoyed this clever entry. Thanks.

God bless~
I enjoyed this rather unusual tale about sweets as told by a bee. Interesting.
I liked this unique POV. Though I did instantly sense that the MC was a bee (or maybe an ant but because the topic is sweet, I suspected bee) it still was intriguing and I was eager to keep reading.

I noticed a couple of tiny typos-- ladies should be lady's and Mom and Dad should be capitalized when used as a name.

I think you did a grand job of thinking outside of the box and encouraging others to see God's miracles in a new light. You did a nice job on this piece and I enjoyed it thoroughly.