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08/30/12
What delightful story! Great plot and pacing, right on target for the topic, a conflict overcome, and the happy ending is icing on the cake. ;)
08/31/12
Nicely done. I enjoyed this quick and easy read. It was a sweet entry. Nicely done.

God bless~
What a delightful read. I was drooling at all those lucious sweet treats you named. Thank you for a fun read.
I really enjoyed this sweet,. romantic tale. I liked how the disaster turned into something nice.

I'll admit I was a tad confused that Mom (Mrs. Kincaid) was doing the flirting with a handsome Young man. I guessed that she was likely widowed or divorced but you might want to make that clear to the reader.(Or perhaps the young man was interested in one of the daughters and I missed something?)

Overall, I thought it was a delightful story and had a nice pace to it. I thought it clever that you used sweets to share the sweet meaning like he was sweet on her or sweetheart. It meshed together quite nicely.