The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow - profoundly penetrating. Nicely done.
God bless~
So very true about heroine. Very deep and profound. Thanks for sharing and God bless.
I think you did a brilliant job of thinking outside of the box. Who ever thought the day would come when sweet could be hurtful and sick cool? You did a nice job of really coming up with something original. It's not an easy subject to tackle but I liked what you did.
I agree with Shann above. This entry is different and a fresh take on the topic whilst conveying an important message.
As others have said, this is a great take on the topic. I can't say I "like" the poem, but it is very well written, and all too true. Nice job.
Your "Heroin" poem tells such a tragic story! It may seem "sweet" at first try, but then its destructive nature is revealed. Good message in your writing!
Congrats. God bless~