The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/12
What a surprising take on the topic! I love this so much. You have presented the Joseph story in such a laid-back manner; to begin with I thought it was actually your testimony, until I read a little further on and it 'twigged.'

You certainly have a talent for taking out the main bits and relaying them to the reader, in a style that is so easy to read and flows incredibly well.

The ending ties the themes in beautifully; hope in times of hopelessness, faith when circumstances suggest doubt, the promises of God that remain always and forever.

I have only one question: did chariot come to "screeching halts?" He he!

A truly wonderful submission. Well done!
08/24/12
Excellent job! I loved this entire well written piece. It was interesting and had me from beginning to end.

I love entries with Biblical intertwinings. Great job.

God bless~
08/24/12
Excellent job! I loved this entire well written piece. It was interesting and had me from beginning to end.

I love entries with Biblical intertwinings. Great job.

God bless~
08/24/12
Excellent job! I loved this entire well written piece. It was interesting and had me from beginning to end.

I love entries with Biblical intertwinings. Great job.

God bless~
08/25/12
A well written and unique take on the topic. You've used the Joseph account well. Good writing!
08/25/12
I like this little trip into Biblical fiction. :)

The ending with the part about "today" was just a bit jarring to me... I wasn't sure if it was supposed to be Joseph speaking to others, or the author speaking to the readers. I think even changing the word to "now" would have made it flow a bit better, and it would still keep the same meaning.

Nice job on this one!
You did a great job of retelling this story. I think the POV was a great idea. I wasn't sure if it would fit the topic but the more I read the more I thought it was a great, fresh and out of the box take on the topic!
08/26/12
Nice retelling of Joseph's story with a good message for all of us at the end! Good tie-in with the topic, too! :)
Wow! Love your take on this weeks topic. It was fresh out of the box run of the mill story. Well written and told.
08/30/12
Excellent story. Congrats on the 1st place! keep writing for the Lord!
08/31/12
Congrats...God bless