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08/24/12
Great reminder of how important OUR time is with the Lord. In this fast paced world we ALL need to take the time to say YES to God's word and private time with Him. Amen.

Nicely done. I enjoyed this well written story.

God bless~
08/26/12
This is a lovely message and one I think we all need to be reminded of often. Life can get too busy and demanding. Nice job.
08/28/12
Loved your description of the elements in God's store and the MC's realization of her needs because she listened for God's voice. Just a suggestion,the ending conversation with Ms. Hunt seemd a little abrupt..perhaps you could add more like i know God will send the perfect person to help you or I will be praying it will be a great success, something to reassure her and let her know you really care about her cause as well as your own spiritual needs. Great little story!
08/29/12
Oh, I could so relate to your MC. I sometimes find myself in the MC situations and like her have to say thanks but no thanks. I enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
08/30/12
Congratulations, my friend! Happy Dance!
08/31/12
Congrats...God bless