The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved this clever rendition and analogy of Jesus' words bringing it to modern day formation. So fresh and well crafted. Nicely done!

God bless~
Nice take on bread and on all the different things found in various aisles of the store. Makes me hungry.
You have a subtle sense of humor that I absolutely adored. I could totally relate to your MC.

I noticed sometimes you were in an aisle and other times an isle (You haven't been the only one to make that typo and I knew you weren't really on an island though it's an interesting thought...) I did cringe a bit at the overuse of got but as I thought about it, the word seemed to really fit your MC.

You did a nice job of trying to approach the topic in a different way while delivering a super important message.
I love how you described all the different isles in the grocery store and wove the Lord into your story. Thank you and God bless.