The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/12
True sentiments and a beautiful message in this lovely poem. Thank you.

God bless~
I truly enjoyed this. I'm not a big poetry person but your delightful rhymes and fast pace drew me in immediately.

I did see a couple of tiny errors like Bible should be capitalized and you wrote surly which means grumpy when I think you meant surely. (Gotta love spell check :))

Not only did you write a piece that was pleasing to the ear, you also managed to deliver the perfect message in a kind and loving way.
Loved your poem. It was spot on.