The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this poem that categorically pronounced pivotal passages to bring it to a prolific conclusion.

Nicely done. God bless~
Amen. A beauitful poem of the marriage feast of the Lamb. Lovely.
This is such a descriptive poem. The first verse especially had me cringing from the picture you painted. That's a great thing in my opinion. You created lines that aren't easily forgotten. Then you deliver a beautiful message of hope and peace.
I consider myself only a student of poetry, but in my opinion, this is EXCELLENT. I only wish you would have come back to the beggar and the rich man somehow. Just a personal observation. :) You have great talent, and I'm so glad I chose this entry to read!
Beautifully done! Congrats.

God bless~