The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/12
You did a great job of finding so many wonderful scriptures to fit the topic.

My only suggestion might be to limit it to 2 or 3 and then go into greater detail to show the reader how that verse relates to life today. Unfortunately, many people will feel overwhelmed by so much Scripture and might skim over it.

I really like the message you showed. It is true that we may fret and worry way more about our physical body than we do about our spirit. I liked how your ending came full circle. Nice job.
08/09/12
Beautiful message about the spirit...I enjoyed the meaning and the efforts you put into this timely piece.
Thank you.

God bless~
08/13/12
This is a wonderful entry on what God teaches us as far as what He would have us eat, etc. I would like to have seen more of your own writing than the number of Scripture you used. However, I did find your entry very informative. The Scripture you did use was right on point.