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What a great take on the story!
08/09/12
An all together clever entry on the feeding of the multitudes! I loved it, how wonderful...great job with this miraculous story.

Thank you. God bless~

This is an adorable story. I fell in love with the little guy immediately. I've read many fish and bread stories this quarter but I think this is the mist adorable one for sure. Very clever.
08/12/12
What a precious story of how Jesus fed the multitude with the bread and fish and still had an abundance. A delightful take on "diet." I thoroughly enjoyed your take on the topic at hand.
08/15/12
You did a great job with the sweet retelling of this familiar Bible story.
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