The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/05
Very unique, having Martha as an onlooker to this familiar scene. Well done!
11/02/05
It's nice to hear this story from the point of view of an observer. Nicely done!
Yep, I agree this was very unique! I really enjoyed this!
11/03/05
I never tire of hearing these stories, and especially the personal interpretations and adaptions. Thanks.
11/03/05
Me either, I enjoyed reading this one from the observation point.
Nice work, blessings.
littlelight
What a beautiful vignette based on that well loved Bible story!
I liked seeing a side of Martha that is a little different than the typical. Good job!
11/04/05
I also liked the Martha POV. Nicely done!
Blessings, Lynda
One of my favorite Bible stories, well told. Good POV choice. Nice descriptions.
11/05/05
I liked the Martha POV as well. You did a great job with this.
Great job! I enjoyed reading this from Martha's view.
11/05/05
Very lovely. I like how you showed the reason for the hope in Martha as Jesus spoke of His death. Very well done:)
11/06/05
I,too, enjoyed it from Martha's POV. Nice to see her portayed as a busy and also loving sister/hostess.