The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/12
Nice job with this entry. It held my attention and was on topic. I want a sandwich too! Thanks.

God bless~
08/04/12
You have my mouth watering.

I appreciate your gratitude for God's provision. Thank you for the thought-provoking story.
I enjoyed this and thought it was a clever take on the topic. I loved the artistic way the produce spoke about how wonderful God is. Often we don't take the time to relish moments like this.

The only red ink I have is don't abbreviate the books of the Bible in case there is someone not familiar with the books and is inspired by your words and wants to read more. If they can't find those references they might get frustrated and give up.

I really thought you captured the topic in a fresh way. The verses you used reinforced your message. This was an enjoyable read.
I loved how you wove your article into such a lovely story. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
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