The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh I LOVED LOVED LOVED this piece. On topic, and provided a wonderful insight into David...I love references to Bible characters and what might have been done or said. Great job. This was superb!

Thank you. God bless~
Hey, great imagination and well written. It speaks of a journey you are on.
Powerfully desciptive and informative. Interesting and encouraging. I like this piece very much.
You did a wonderful job of bringing David to life and allowing me to see what he may have been thinking.
I really enjoyed this piece. I thought it was going to go down the Bathsheba track; I'm so glad to be wrong! You picked a wonderful person to write on; and I love that you wove the wilderness account into David's story. Very cleverly done, with a powerful message of conviction (not condemnation!) throughout, ending with hope and truth. Very well done.
WOW! This was such a joy to read. Thank you and God bless.

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Congratulations for ranking 2nd in your level and 14th overall!