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08/02/12
I was drawn in to your poem right away. I felt the turmoil of your MC. Then I felt the MC's soul change. Good job.
08/02/12
I was drawn in to your poem right away. I felt the turmoil of your MC. Then I felt the MC's soul change. Good job.
08/02/12
I was drawn in to your poem right away. I felt the turmoil of your MC. Then I felt the MC's soul change. Good job.
08/02/12
Sorry. Don't know how I multiplied my comment.
08/03/12
Beautiful and compelling poem. Thank you so much.

God bless~
A truly beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
I could really relate to this piece. It reminds me of some of the poems I write where I start in a dark place but then God leads me to the light. Very powerful.