The Official Writing Challenge
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I have no "critique" comments. I want only to say that your story deeply touched me. Thank you!
07/27/12
This was beautifully written and touched my heart deeply. I truly loved it and it held me captive until the end, I shall remember this story. Well done. Thank you.

God Bless~
07/29/12
I enjoyed every word. Creative, interesting, touching and very well written.
This is delightful. I thought it a touch of genius to describe the dishes that way. How true it is too that bits of our personalities filter down into the things we make. You did a phenomenal job of staying on topic but presenting it in a very unique POV.
08/02/12
Congrats! I completely enjoyed your article from start to finish. You deserved to win or place. I'm glad I'm not a judge. Thanks for sharing.
08/02/12
This story is incredibly creative! Good job.