The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/12
Oh I liked this clever and entertaining entry. It held my attention, and I thought it was going to end differently, but was happy with your ending.

Nicely done. God Bless~
07/29/12
Very interesting piece. Wasn't the ending I was expecting. You kept me guessing.
This is a cute story. I've done similar things like making something and putting it in the oven and forgetting to turn the oven on.

I do have one question what's a church op-shop? But then I googled it and discovered it's a store with used items in it. I like it when a story teaches me something new. Good job.
I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for a very interesting story.