The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/12
Entertaining and totally enjoyable piece. I really thought this to be clever and well so well written. Thanks. God Bless~
HOBO STEW. I enjoyed this so very much. Brought back memories of when I was a child. We lived near the train tracks and my momma never turned a hungry man away and she fed many Hobo's. Thanks for sharing and God bless.
This is such a creative piece. I liked the POV you used. It's not easy to pull off speaking directly to your reader but you did a splendid job of it. Such an original and fun take on the topic. It made me think a bit of an Andy Griffith episode where Opie took up with a hobo. Being compared to Andy Griffith is a very high compliment in my book. Outstanding bit of writing.
07/31/12
I enjoyed this very much. You have an easy style that makes reading it fun. Your cretive view point made the topic fresh...just like your feast fit for a King. Thanks.
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level two!