The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/12
Good job I've enjoyed this entire piece. Nicely done. God bless~
Breakfasts like that are so enjoyable. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
07/29/12
I could almost smell the wonderful aromas of the breakfast. I enjoyed reading your poem.
I really loved this poem and I'm not big on poetry though this style you used is my favorite.

Some of the lines seemed to veer off the pattern just a touch, but anyone who has ever attempted poetry really understands that thew piece is never complete until the author can no longer write. I still look at poems from 20-30 years ago and take out my Pledge and start polishing.

Doing all of that in a few days is even harder. Your words were a balm to my broken spirit. Thank you for that.