The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for this lovely and touching story. Your dad's story will remain in your heart as an important memory and treasure until you meet again.

God Bless~
That sounds like a wonderful room, full of memories, full of love. Well done.
This is a sweet testimonial to your father and it took me back to a simpler time. Though I'm sure the memory is very special to you, I wonder if it might have drawn your readers in more had you made your father a character and have him retell his story with the kids interrupting, anxious for the next line.You did a fine job of writing on topic and I believe this story will be something that many generations of your family will enjoy. Nice job.