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07/20/12
This was such a poignant story, oh my goodness. I felt your pain about losing your grandmother, and I loved the ending bringing it all together. One day we will all sit with Jesus, and the loved ones who have gone before us.

Thank you for this beautiful story from your heart...that came into my heart.

God Bless~
You were blessed to have a grandma in your life as you grew up- great memory! Thanks for sharing.
You were so blessed to have such a loving grandma. Such sweet loving memories of one very special lady. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
This is a lovely devotion. You did a great job of describing a real experience and then relating it to something in the Bible. Many people can associate with someone who has lost a loved one.

The tiny red ink I have is you used further instead of farther (think of distance that can be measured as far and that will help to remind you to use farther)

I think if you added a scripture reading and a prayer you would have the framework of an outstanding devotion that many can appreciate. Nice job.
Congratulations for placing 6th in level two!