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What a great poem. It was enlightening and peaceful at once. I loved it. Thanks.

God bless~
Hi -

Indeed, this poem has rhythm.

And the love aroma is deliciously displayed.

Thank you for this sweet kitchen arrangement.
I like the repetition of lines. What a great heritage!
This is just beautiful. I'm not a poetry expert but the rhythm and timing seemed to be spot on.

The message you bring in this ode is one of love and tradition and the joy of providing for those we love. I would do well to print this out and post it in my kitchen, as a reminder of my role as a wife and mum. It's so easy to get caught up in the 'equal opportunity' way of thinking; I long to have this kind of heart. Thank you so much for writing this and for the blessing you have brought to my heart today. XO
I thoroughly enjoyed your poetry. It was filled with so much love and sweet memories of how important one room can be.
This is lovely. I enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm to it. It tugged at my heart as I pictured the MC remember what she had been taught by prior generations. Yes times do change but I really respect how the love while preparing can remain steeped in tradition.