The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/12
Wow- great job with this entry. I love Biblical characters and stories come to light...and this one was a well written one.

Excellent job. Thank you.

God Bless~
07/13/12
This was a fresh, imaginative look at a familiar Bible story! :)
I loved how you drew the reader into the story. A new spin on the Prodigal. Very well written. Thank you and God bless.
This is a brilliant idea. I think it is quite creative and out of the box.

I think some may think it is weak on topic but I believe there is a reason God had you write this. I'd encourage you to polish it up some and add more details. I think it would be a great children's story. Though it may need some work with typos like dads instead of Dad's I also think you have a great deal of potential with this story. it would be perfect for a Sunday school take home sheet.
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