The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/12
An interesting and fresh way of covering the topic at hand. Powerfully done in such a short entry. Great job.

GOD bless~
07/13/12
Great message here in this short dialogue! (I'm not sure it was really "on topic," though.) I loved your poetic, old-style wording and the nice way the conversation flowed. Effective writing!
Right on topic and the poetry was exquisite. I loved this and want to thank you for a lovely entry.
This is a really poetic piece. You say some really powerful things in an elegant way.