The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/12
Thanks for sharing your memories with us. Only suggestion I have is to "make new paragraphs." other than that I enjoyed this piece which was certainly on topic. Thank you.

God bless~
Thank you for the definition of a picnic and for the enjoyable description of a picnic in the desert.
This is a delightful essay. You did a great job describing your memory. I felt it a tad sad that you had to go back to childhood for a stress free one. But what a powerful message in that statement! As adults we do fret and worry, often to the point of stressing out. No wonder Jesus instructs us to have the faith of a child. What a clever way to state your message without coming off as preachy.