The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/12
This was a sweet introspective piece. I enjoyed your words...thanks for sharing your heart.

God Bless~
This is really lovely. At first when you mentioned hide God's word in my heart, I thought that can't be right! As I read on I realized you didn't mean keep God's word a secret but to use it to protect my heart.

You have a few tiny typos that a good proofreader would be able to help you with. Feel free to check the message boards or ask someone you trust to proof your story before you submit it.

You did a nice job of writing on topic and getting right to the heart of the matter. :)